First Draft Feedback

After showing the class our first draft we received feedback, they pointed out things that needed to be improved and worked upon - such as lip syncing and reused footage. Although our group already knew this and intended to fix them, the feedback was useful as it also showed what worked well. For example, the complimented Kelly's (Raina) overall performance and the cinematography. We also received some pointers about editing which will be useful as they apply to the conventions of our music video and the electro-pop genre.

For a first draft it was relatively successful and with the necessary changes we will be able to achieve our desired result, as a group we will plan when to re-shoot due to our differing schedules.