First Draft Feedback

After showing the class our first draft we received feedback, they pointed out things that needed to be improved and worked upon - such as lip syncing and reused footage. Although our group already knew this and intended to fix them, the feedback was useful as it also showed what worked well. For example, the complimented Kelly's (Raina) overall performance and the cinematography. We also received some pointers about editing which will be useful as they apply to the conventions of our music video and the electro-pop genre.

For a first draft it was relatively successful and with the necessary changes we will be able to achieve our desired result, as a group we will plan when to re-shoot due to our differing schedules.

Feedback

From our teacher's feedback I will make sure to blog all developments and reflect on them as we go. Our project is progressing well, with each of us taking on one thing to do (while referring to the group) - this will allow us to get the planning done quickly and efficiently.

Pitch Feedback and Reflection

These are the feedback sheets from other pupils and our teacher after presenting our pitch. There are some things that do work well, but also some things that do not - from this we will improve our artist and ideas for the music video.
Positive: Our artist, Record label and target audience are believable, they all fit together to create the type of artist and the audience we intended to.

Negative: Narrative/Music video is not clear enough. As a group we will plan everything more thoroughly and decided exactly what we want in the video. 

Feedback

I will go back through my posts and add some reflective comments where necessary, also double checking my spelling and grammar. Also a more varied format, as a group we will produce these results through videos and voice recordings.